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1st Draft Finished, 106,000 words

Great news for those who have been waiting patiently for over three years for the follow-up to The Montgomery Canal Murder, not only is the first draft finished, but my Alpha reader gave it a huge thumbs up. This is crucial to all the work I’ve put in over the last 3 years because it depended on several aspects, aspects I was truly worried about, but, I’m glad to say, it passed with flying colours. 


Since then, I’ve done 4 edits and got it in a shape which I’m happy for other people to read it. At present my Beta readers are having a read through and I’m just waiting on their feedback (this is one of the most nerve-wracking parts of the process. As a writer, I am unable to consume my own content as a reader which is why feedback from trusted sources is invaluable. It tells me, does the story work? Are the characters good enough? Is the style of prose ok? Does it all hold together? As you can see, waiting on responses to these areas is not good for getting a good nights sleep. 


What’s it called? 

The Body in the White Room


Rhydsbury House, nestled deep in the heart of rural Shropshire, serves as an artists’ retreat and the home of the renowned and eccentric painter Alistair Blair. But the tranquillity is shattered when Rosie Blackthorne, the newly employed maid, discovers the garrotted body of Blair’s wife in his white room. Suspicion swiftly falls on Alistair and his estranged brother who had arrived at the house the previous night after spending six years abroad. 


Owing to her success in apprehending the Montgomery Canal Murderer, Inspector Isabelle Cannon is brought in as a consultant on what initially appears to be a straightforward case. But when troubling inconsistencies emerge, Cannon is called back, and she quickly discovers the truth lurking in the shadows of Rhydsbury House may be more twisted than anyone imagined.


I don’t have a release date yet, this would depend on beta feedback, but I’d love it to be either before the school holidays (mid July) or afterwards (September) More news as I have it.


Stay safe, happy and healthy.


Cheers

Pete


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THE SPECTRE BENEATH

PLAGUE AND THE DECAY

The Blog of the Hollow

By Pete Worrall February 7, 2022

I recall watching Quatermass when I was young, however, I don’t think it was the Hammer productions, instead the BBC adaptations. Because it was a long time ago I can no longer remember what the Quatermass films were about and what happened in them. The only recollection I have is the middle-aged, bearded scientist image of the leading role, Bernard Quatermass.

Amazon Prime have, or at least had, I’ve not checked in a while, both 1955’s The Quatermass Experiment and Quatermass II and I watched The Quatermass Experiment not so long ago. I thoroughly enjoyed it from a story point of view and thought the ideas and the way the plot unfolds was really good. My least favourite aspect was Quatermass himself played by Brian Donlevy. Spikey and uncharismatic, I felt the film would be better off without him and wasn’t 100% sure what he brought to the proceedings. However, the 1967 version of Quatermass and the Pit was in my Hammer Boxset and I was eager to find out what was in store and what Andrew Keir could bring to the role of the scientist

From IMDB

A mysterious artifact is unearthed in London, and famous scientist Bernard Quatermass is called into to divine its origins and explain its strange effects on people.

By Pete Worrall February 7, 2022

For some reason I thought I had already seen this Hammer Horror classic and maybe I had when I was younger but I could not recall the opening scenes suggesting I had not. I recognised imagery from the film thanks to trailers, clips and segments in Iron Maiden videos; perhaps this was the cause of my mistake. My expectations were high when hitting play as some, especially in the British Horror Group I am a member of, herald it as peak Hammer with the great Christopher Lee often siting The Devil Rides Out as his favourite Hammer film. It had a lot to live up to, however, invariably such films fail to deliver due to unmeetable expectations, but Christopher Lee, Devil worship, Charles Gray, directed by the great Terence Fisher…what could go wrong?

First of all, it was lovely to see Christopher Lee starring as the protagonist, not the action type, that was the job of Leon Greene, but as the wise council and voice of reason, no wonder it was Lee’s favourite Hammer film, he got the chance to play a good guy for once.

The film doesn’t hang about, as soon as Leone Green lands his plane and is met by Christopher Lee. He asks about someone called Simon and within a few lines of dialogue we’re at Simon’s new house because they’re worried about him and hadn’t seen him for at least three months. My first thought was he’d met a girl or taken a new job but it turns out he’s having a dinner party and hob nobbing with a group of new friends from an astronomical society. Of course, Christopher Lee suspects they’re all devil worshippers ready to sacrifice chickens. For me, it was a stretch for him to conclude this within the first nine minutes of the film and I wish more time was given for his suspicions to embed. A general decline in Simon’s behaviour perhaps or more clues gathered to Simon’s new ‘hobby’, it all happened a little too quickly, especially as Simon’s behaviour is quite pleasant and not sinister at all. Simon’s bought a new house, I’ve not seen him in three months that means he’s dealing in black magic. Simon insists Greene and Lee leave (this would make more than thirteen at the party and thus unable to perform the ritual) but Lee punches Simon’s lights out instead before kidnapping him and slugging the butler at the same time, it was all a little clunky for me.

By Pete Worrall February 6, 2022

One of the best Christmas presents I have ever received, yes, even greater than the roller-skates when I was seven, and I wrote that correctly, they were roller-skates not roller-boots which basically meant they were flipflops with wheels, was The Hammer Collection box set. 20 Hammer films including all their classic movies (although that’s a matter of opinion), some I have seen a long time ago and some I have yet to watch. I’m planning to cover some of them in this blog…well, I’ll see how I go.

The first one I fancied out of the box was 1965’s The Nanny with Bette Davies and Wendy Craig, a film I had not seen and the IMDB premise piqued my interest.

There's just something not quite right when Bette Davis stars as an English nanny. And is her 10-year-old charge an emotionally disturbed murderer or just an insolent brat?

The film opens with Bette Davies carrying a parcel through a playground and a park and all is good with the world, it has to be, the music by Richard Rodney Bennett tells us so. She eventually ends up at her employers who are having a to do where the mother is in tears and the husband is telling her to pull herself together, why? Because their son is coming home. Bette swans about as if this is a regular occurrence and already the husband and wife relationship is an uncomfortable watch with the prickly James Villiers, who also played a prickly role in For Your Eyes Only, instructing Wendy Craig to put some make up on while she bawls into a pillow.

By Pete Worrall December 19, 2018

I sadly missed Get Out when it was on at the local cinema and I’m quite glad I did because I’m not sure I would want to squirm in my seat in public for 110 minutes. I don’t think I’ve felt so uncomfortable watching a film, not even watching The Wicker Man. In fact, if you’ve not seen it, stop reading this and try and grab yourself a copy.

From IMDB: Chris and his girlfriend Rose go upstate to visit her parents for the weekend. At first, Chris reads the family's overly accommodating behaviour as nervous attempts to deal with their daughter's interracial relationship, but as the weekend progresses, a series of increasingly disturbing discoveries lead him to a truth that he never could have imagined.

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The Montgomery Canal Murder

August 27th 1982. 

By the sleepy town of Upton Waters lies a disused and overgrown section of the Montgomery Canal. Its stagnant water hides a grim secret. During summer’s heatwave, the water level drops to expose the body of a strangled, naked woman caged in an upturned shopping trolley. 


New Year’s Eve 1990. 

The bullish Inspector Isabelle Cannon is transferred to Upton Waters Police Station as part of a disciplinary procedure. In an effort to keep her out his way, Sergeant Williams gives her the unsolved murder of the woman dragged from the Montgomery Canal in 1982. 


Expecting to only be posted to Upton Waters for a couple of weeks, Isabelle is reluctant to invest in the cold case, yet, her interest is piqued when she learns the dead woman remains unidentified. Who is she, why was she murdered and is the killer still living in Upton Waters?


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Update Winter 2025


Writing Update:


Marley ‘Scoop The Loot’ Worrall: 6th Oct 2013 – 16th Jan 2025


Sadly, the quietest, most laid back and gentle of dogs died in January.


Retired from the track with a gammy leg, Marley was the right dog at the right time helping me stay sane through redundancy and the covid lockdowns making us the best of pals. His finest moment was completing last April’s 100 mile challenge raising almost £1000 in the process. 


He was my best pal and we went everywhere together. Every trip out to do research for my books I took Marley. From the Montgomery Canal to Montgomery Castle, he was by my side. The majority of writing ideas came to me while we were out walking.


Sadly, he had been poorly for quite some time and settling down to write was becoming more and more difficult because, for me at least, writing is all aboout being in the right frame of mind and since the middle of 2024, I've not been mentally capable of capitalising on from the great work I managed to achieve during April 2024's challenge.


On a more positive note, things are settling down and I'm finding more time to sit down and write. Although I miss my friend greatly, my head is a lot clearer and I've managed to make up for lost time on the new book. I've just hit 94,400 words and I only have 5 chapters to write. I suspect the finished draft will end at around 110,000 words, so, not long to go and I hope to have the first draft completed by the end of April. Finger crossed.


Stay safe, happy and healthy.


Cheers

Pete


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